same here! also the number of times 'crap', 'holy crap' and its variants were mentioned. add 'i'm not hungry' to the list too. i hate girls who don't like to eat.

ok fine, i try to read it for the juicy parts but there's only so much garbage one can take. the concept is indeed interesting but unfortunately the author did not develop it well.

MT, i think the guy actually tried too hard to be christian grey-ish and did the slapping way too seriously. there's even text messaging involved like the email exchanges in the book ^__^