about things like that. I once had to cut a 1,000 word story down to about 600, because of things like beer, wine, sex, and seduction.


A business story about bottling firm in Phils was cut because wording referencing their profit made from their beer "factory" had to be deleted.


When doing editing for a well known magazine - the caption words "wine glass" were missed by the page designer - thank goodness I used to check everything...