I enjoyed reading what you wrote. Minimum of dialogues and more of descriptive writing. I love that. You have an eye for detail, which i again, i adore. And you also managed to put in the twist-in-the-tale factor. Good attempt. Hope you keep writing.
A few thoughts to further your talent...
1) Try starting a blog. Dont write for others, write for yourself. Keep at it. You can polish your skills.
2) There is a doha creative writing group around. They meet every second tuesdays i believe. Try becoming a member. Although my job schedule never allowed me to be a part of it, i always wanted to. I think it'll help you. Try this site:
I enjoyed reading what you wrote. Minimum of dialogues and more of descriptive writing. I love that. You have an eye for detail, which i again, i adore. And you also managed to put in the twist-in-the-tale factor. Good attempt. Hope you keep writing.
A few thoughts to further your talent...
1) Try starting a blog. Dont write for others, write for yourself. Keep at it. You can polish your skills.
2) There is a doha creative writing group around. They meet every second tuesdays i believe. Try becoming a member. Although my job schedule never allowed me to be a part of it, i always wanted to. I think it'll help you. Try this site:
http://community.livejournal.com/doha_writers/
Happy writing, and keep posting.