Hmmmm (long, thoughtful pause) if you read the lengthy story carefully it is VERY well written with a great flair for the dramatic and salacious and with remarkably few extraneous details. It appears to have then been carefully transliterated into consistently bad but very readable and entertaining English. I am reminded of all the bosom-heaving, bodice-ripping romances available in supermarkets. My dear Kashish, you are either an extremely talented and articulate girl considering your dire plight and your seeming lack of linguistic ability or you are a skilled and professional fiction writer! I see great hope for you either way. You are clever enough to come through. Good luck!
Mandi
Hmmmm (long, thoughtful pause) if you read the lengthy story carefully it is VERY well written with a great flair for the dramatic and salacious and with remarkably few extraneous details. It appears to have then been carefully transliterated into consistently bad but very readable and entertaining English. I am reminded of all the bosom-heaving, bodice-ripping romances available in supermarkets. My dear Kashish, you are either an extremely talented and articulate girl considering your dire plight and your seeming lack of linguistic ability or you are a skilled and professional fiction writer! I see great hope for you either way. You are clever enough to come through. Good luck!
Mandi