..between words and lines...it was posted wrong...  :

Veiled in black

she felt more woman

In her secrets

than the siren in red

whose skin spills like cream on concrete 

btw...I'm surprised people commented on this post at all! it's hardly anything really....makes me think that there are alot of people out there interested in learning more about poetry?

I don't know anything myself..which is why i would also like to learn from other people...