Without your love ...

King Edshel
By King Edshel

I can't sleep, knowing that you are leaving …
I don't know; don't want to believe in this.
When I go home, I feel so lonely.
Why you can't be always with me..
Do I really have to ask?
Those silly questions.
Looking for answers.
I know that it does not exist.

My heart is crying everyday and night…
Trying hard and have to fight.
Not to let go of those tears.
I don't want her to see me weak.
I should be stronger.
Stand up for her.
I'm getting older.
And there is no time any more …

I will do everything that no one did…
To see always your lovely smile.
I will hold all of the pain around.
Deep there within my soul.
Because I don't want to see you cry.
I will tightly hold you.
You know that I love you.
And would never let you go...

You changed a lot in me and make a better man…
I just wonder if you still loving me.
The same way it used to be before.
My heart is broken.
My mind is burning.
And my soul is in pain.
Please stay, don't go away.
How am I supposed to survive…
This life without your love…

By Gypsy• 22 Oct 2007 10:29
Gypsy

Ahhhh! I'm all choked up! I usually hate this kind of sentimental stuff, but that was really sweet King. I hope it works out for you. :) Man, I want to be in love again :(

"I fight with love and I laugh with rage, you have to live light enough to see the humor and long enough to see some change." Ani Difranco

By owen• 22 Oct 2007 10:27
owen

KE!!!!..come on..is she leaving tomorrow?..you still have more time (i think..) with your girl...enjoy your time with her than moping around..cheer up..want some ice cream?..:P

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By gypsy gal• 22 Oct 2007 10:26
gypsy gal

Dont be pessimistic...there is day after the night….its not the end of the world. If you failed to convince her to be with you…...or if she thinks her happiness is elsewhere….no point in insisting her to be with you. As Greeker said…she will realize your love one day and come back to you… Anywayz…nice poem buddy.

By swissgirl39• 22 Oct 2007 10:16
swissgirl39

Those words could be mine.LOL.I thought the same some time ago,but now am back into life.Believe me,you feel better after some times.Im professional in situations like this.First i wanted to die,but then i said to myself,come on,life goes on,life is wonderful and for sure has many happy and lucky moments for you.

You will make it.

Of course i wish you verry good luck and the power to handle it for good.

:-D

*Create your own destiny,fighting against your dark sides,raise your

spirituality.Every day is a new day.A new life.

Keep the faith!*

By King Edshel• 22 Oct 2007 10:10
King Edshel

My hope is dead ...

My future is dark ...

Nothing can heal my wounds ...

No one can help me ...

Gotta deal with those by myself ... Wish me luck ...

By swissgirl39• 22 Oct 2007 10:08
swissgirl39

First you think you could not move anymore,nor breath.Just cry.But then,after some days...life comes back to you.King,look forward,and maybe not all is lost.There is always a hope.

:-D

*Create your own destiny,fighting against your dark sides,raise your

spirituality.Every day is a new day.A new life.

Keep the faith!*

By owen• 22 Oct 2007 10:03
owen

i feel for you buddy...i know it will be painful when the time comes...as the saying goes "time heals all wounds"..painful at the beginning but in the long run you will feel that you have to move on...

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By King Edshel• 22 Oct 2007 09:59
King Edshel

my best friend would never be always with me and one day will be bothered with that and i would not see anyone around ... My recovery journey takes a lot .. I just know when would it start [the moment she would leave me] and only god knows when would it end ... sigh

By owen• 22 Oct 2007 09:56
owen

been there..done that KE..and MUST be like that...and i know you could do the same, it's hard but you got friends to support you if ever...

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By swissgirl39• 22 Oct 2007 09:55
swissgirl39

Huuhhh,easy to say but hard to do.King,you are not the only one in this situation.But what to do,life must and will go on.All the best to you and keep on rocking man.

;-D

By the way,congrats,the poem is verry nice.Maybe you change your profession?

;-D

*Create your own destiny,fighting against your dark sides,raise your

spirituality.Every day is a new day.A new life.

Keep the faith!*

By King Edshel• 22 Oct 2007 09:54
King Edshel

than do ... easy said ...

By owen• 22 Oct 2007 09:38
owen

that is right KE...mind over heart..

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By King Edshel• 22 Oct 2007 09:22
King Edshel

Thank you for the advice man, it is really appreciated here. I do understand that and if she would be happy, then how can I just keep her away from her happiness? Can’t be that selfish because I love all the people, so how about someone very close to me that I love?

Will try to figure things out and see, don’t worry because when it comes to mind thinking … I always set my emotions a side …

By Booo• 22 Oct 2007 09:16
Booo

You just pulled a confession out of me :P

By dnaviin• 22 Oct 2007 09:14
dnaviin

yup i totally agree with Greeker.

thts the best way talk to her n tell her

By anonymous• 22 Oct 2007 09:08
anonymous

Worthy Opponent? I'm lost in the translation, Exactly, What do you mean by worthy opponent?

I

The Red Pope of Qatar Living

Abba, Abba, Padre!

By Greeker• 22 Oct 2007 09:05
Rating: 4/5
Greeker

I am not sure if you wrote this poem because someone dear to you is leaving. If that is indeed the case, an open heart to heart talk is the only answer.

Its always one-on-one dialogue that helps, i believe so. And dont try calling her on phone, insist that you need to SEE her. E-mails, phone calls can never substitute for your presence. And the presence in front of her when you talk to her is very important.

I dont know what her reason for leaving is, but if it indeed is something that cannot be repaired, then please, dont prolong the heartburn. There is an old saying that 'if you love a person, let her go and if she returns, she will never leave again'.

Maybe, it may not be that bad after all. Maybe she just needs a break. But whatever it is, try and respect her decision. She will much appreciate that and most possibly (knowing the wonderful guy you are), will return to you. Be optimistic, chin up. You are not gonna let that broad shoulder sag.

It will take more than this to beat you down, my man. This is but temporary. The tough part is to not go under, and i fully believe you are capable.

On another note, the poem was brilliant. Even if the underlying mood was sad, it came out with exactly what you were feeling. And that, is the hallmark of a good poem. Well done. Hope your girl reads it as well...

By Booo• 22 Oct 2007 09:05
Booo

Pope i have underestimated you, you seem to be a worthy opponent.

By King Edshel• 22 Oct 2007 09:03
King Edshel

put my emotions a side and use my mind. Being in that circle will make me lose everything, getting out of the circle and look from a different angle might help ...

By anonymous• 22 Oct 2007 09:02
anonymous

I'm talking about the poem and the author ladies..\\

Boo, thanks for your confessions......LOL

The Red Pope of Qatar Living

Abba, Abba, Padre!

By Booo• 22 Oct 2007 09:00
Booo

lol...love damage!..no no i just try to avoid love and all its insanities, i find that it is the healthier way. Otherwise we end up like King Edshel here, uncontrollably in love, and you wouldnt like me wen i'm uncontrollably in love, it gets messy.

By owen• 22 Oct 2007 08:57
owen

Red Pope its not me who is suppose to be in your confession booth, invite KE here...:D

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By anonymous• 22 Oct 2007 08:54
Rating: 2/5
anonymous

My Confession Booth is open for love damage control maneuverers....

The Red Pope of Qatar Living

Abba, Abba, Padre!

By novita77• 22 Oct 2007 08:54
novita77

King ... tell her before its too late ... tell her you dont want her to leave you ...

By owen• 22 Oct 2007 08:51
owen

thinking out loud?...and that much huh?....and hmmmm, not bad for composing such "love poem"...you inlove? *dangs my head* lol..obviously, am i right?...:P

i can sense some issues behind your lines...

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By Booo• 22 Oct 2007 08:49
Booo

Love...the curse of insanity

By King Edshel• 22 Oct 2007 08:47
King Edshel

just were looking a head and TOL 'thinking out loud' ... an yeah Owen .. I wrote this one, sorry for the bad quality but i don't copy these things from anywhere else ...

By dnaviin• 22 Oct 2007 08:38
dnaviin

seems to me ur in lov

but y r u leting her leave...

By novita77• 22 Oct 2007 08:35
novita77

King Edshel in love ....

By owen• 22 Oct 2007 08:29
owen

huh?!...KE? who is leaving?...

hmmmm..you made this?

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By t_coffee_or_me• 22 Oct 2007 06:56
t_coffee_or_me

Who is leaving?

If you can't change your fate, change your attitude.

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