QLers - your feedback pls

Your blog (?) or novelette is not accepting any comments and it is not fair to post it here.

Good attempt at a chapter from a novellete. Liked some of the phrases.

The english is a mix of old and new..

Good start .. Keep going ..

Thank you very much for your valuable feedback. i shall follow your suggestions, especially the comment options, spell check & reaction tick box.

PS: being a person never been to pakistan, turkey etc, i had to do a small research (thanks to internet & books like "freedom @ midnight"). Moreover, i've no hesitation to admit that i am influenced with the writing style of Dan Brown.

Thank you once again.

regards,

It's so hard to comment on your blog!

I am 'from' iktib.com, and that option is not available to post a comment.

If you can find a way, then feel free to add this to the blog comments....

qhris.iktib.com

Enthralling....some really cute turns of phrase, I loved the disobedience of the scarf, the depiction of places I have never been to.

Interesting reading and slightly melancholic, so unsure why someone can select 'funny' in the reactions tick-box when it is dark material in the infancy of the story...

p.s, your spell-checker needs tweaking in some places, it has avoided some words that need correcting.

Yes, I am annoying for pointing that out.

But then, I am the kind of guy who feels a first date could be consigned to disappointment if there is a spelling mistake on the menu, so I am a pedant about these things.

not interested, don't like link farming on forums. sorry...