"LOST LOVE"...!!!(. A VERY TOUCHING POEM!!!)

deeejay SJ
By deeejay SJ

Hey people..this is a very touching poem written by FARHA ABOO BACKER....She's a student studying for Human Resources..in Qatar...so i need you people 2 comment & rate the poem..Thanks !!!

TITLE: ♥ ♥ "LOST LOVE"♥ ♥

There Was a time when I was all lost & alone,
Until you came & made me your own !!
Now why did you leave me & go??
Did you have to do so...????

There you are, away from me so far,
Passing by, like a shooting star !!
When I see U from a distance, that is how i react,
And believe it or not, this is a fact !!

Of yours, a small glance,
Makes my heart dance !!
How I wish you were here with me,
Just the way, you once used to be !!

Why couldn't that moment last forever??
Don't know about u, but I don't feel any better !!
And now my world has turned black,
As I'm nevergoing to get you back !!

You know, you are my loss,
And I still didn't figure out the cause !!
Was it my mistake??
Or was your love fake????

Whenever you were there, the way I felt...
It was like, then & there, I would melt !!
I can't forget you & thats the biggest pain I'm going through,
Or maybe I don't want to forget you coz its sumthing i really can't do !!

Those days when you were mine,
Was the feeling of reaching cloud nine !!
How i wish, you're still there,
To give me all the love & care !!

Now that everything has turned different,
No more with this pain, I want to stay innocent !!
Today, the way you treat me is all negative,
But I guess I'm real crazy to take it all positive !!

Even though you treat me like trash,
I would still treat you like my own cash !!
Maybe its you who'z the waste,
But somehow you're still my taste !!

You have taken all my happiness with you...Why??
Did you just want to leave me to cry????
Don't I have the right to be happy again??
And what did you gain by giving me all this pain????

Existing are the memories,
Still fresh like the morning breeze !!
Now, you are my past,
But Hey, you're still the one I'll love till the last !!

Even today, for me you're still 'The BEST',
Among the rest !!
And my endless love for you,
Will always remain TRUE !!

♥♥♥By:Farha Aboo Backer♥♥♥
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By deeejay SJ• 10 Oct 2009 23:48
deeejay SJ

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

By deeejay SJ• 7 Oct 2009 16:11
deeejay SJ

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By deeejay SJ• 7 Oct 2009 11:42
deeejay SJ

Thnx PpL....!!! =)

By juicyme• 7 Oct 2009 08:57
juicyme

Hearing the sound of the telephone ring

Forced me out of bed.

Listening to the voice of my brother scream

Being unprepared for what he said.

"SISTER there was an accident and mom and dad were killed"

Throwing the phone across the room

I fell to my knees as my heart spilled

My life wasn't always so great

But everything else became worse

I thought nothing could make me break

Now i feel as if I've been cursed

At the bitter age of thirteen years old

My parents death, began to take it's toll

On rainy days i wish it snowed

Because raindrops gave my tears control

In school i could never concentrate

Or would refuse to do the work and turn it in late

During lunch I'd give myself time to think

By taking long walks I never ate

There was never a day that would go my way

Ever since my parents were taken away

There are no words that could ever explain

What hides behind my silence and pain

Everyday is always the same

I come home and unpack my things

Then when i get ready to change

I still wait for my mom to call my name

Simple things such as that

Would make me want my mother back

Or remembering the first time i swung a bat

Making my dad proud every time we'd play catch

But every night i start to cry and realize they are gone

I play a song and pray to god there's a heaven up above

I promise to wait and never give up, i know up there i will be loved

But i hope that i don't grow to be old

Because I want to feel again the lost love

of my parents up above in heaven with the Lord.....

By sweetpink• 7 Oct 2009 08:35
sweetpink

love and pain is always together..if u feel the love inside of your heart expect that u will hurt.its the combination of love and pain..

By blue_rose• 7 Oct 2009 08:20
blue_rose

nice poem deejay

thanks for sharing

By Rizks• 7 Oct 2009 08:08
Rizks

Yea, m missing his lovely threads which contains Love lines in a Lovely way... :)

By Ms.Chief_vous• 7 Oct 2009 08:05
Ms.Chief_vous

Rizks...... u missed jimmi? Lolz

^_^

By Rizks• 7 Oct 2009 07:30
Rating: 2/5
Rizks

hmmm.. Jimimadi ?

By Thomas Ponraj• 7 Oct 2009 07:22
Thomas Ponraj

Even today, for me you're still 'The BEST',

Among the rest !!

And my endless love for you,

Will always remain TRUE !! I Like this sentence very much. This poem shows my painful heart too.

By ahmedashfaq• 7 Oct 2009 07:19
ahmedashfaq

she really represented my life story. a lol poem

By QHell• 7 Oct 2009 07:02
Rating: 3/5
QHell

Only Love & Respect of Others Make us Human.

===========================================

It started very nice but then it went a little off topic :-)

"Even though you treat me like trash,

I would still treat you like my own cash !!

Maybe its you who'z the waste,

But somehow you're still my taste !!"

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By the way, when you are in love - You are in Love and no other thought can gain any space in your heart. Love is your gain, don't worry too much about losing someone.

Enjoy your love, its in your heart - keep it in your heart - don't let it go!

By lovern_cute• 7 Oct 2009 07:01
Rating: 5/5
lovern_cute

Really touch my heart....

Even today, for me you're still 'The BEST',

Among the rest !!

And my endless love for you,

Will always remain TRUE !!

By leelah• 7 Oct 2009 01:53
Rating: 4/5
leelah

love is never lost.if not reciprocated, it will flow back and soften and purify the heart.(WASHINGTON IRVING)

nice try Farha keep it up.

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